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Can a human girl survive in a mental hospital for giant monsters
This choice: You lose you're grip and go flying  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Whiplash

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Whitney moves her body so fast, her tail moves like a whiplash and you lose your grip and are sent flying through the air screaming. As you do, Whitney's ears twitch. "That sounded like Sylvia," says Whitney. "She's here somewhere, I know it." The rhino woman moves slowly as she scans the floor for you, all while adjusting her glasses. "Where are you, you little rat?"

As you fly through the air, you land on one of the limbs of the ceiling fan above Dr. West's office. You stop to catch your breath and look at the surroundings. When you realize exactly where you are, your face turns pale. "I could've been shredded." You say. "Thank goodness the fan wasn't on." You look down to see Whitney scanning the floor for you. "You know, Sylvia," she says directed towards you, even though she doesn't know where you are. "What you're doing is taking advantage of a system meant to help people with legitimate mental disorders. Your fellow patients are in here because there is something wrong with them and they need help. You on the other hand, I have little doubt, are perfectly fine. It's not really fair. This is a mental hospital, not a hideaway for criminals.

Whitney even bends down and looks under Dr. West's desk again. She sounded really mad. You're in utter fear of the thought of that rhino catching you. You know Whitney doesn't eat humans but the wererhino giantess was out for blood.

As if things couldn't possibly be any worse, you hear the door open and in walks Abilene, that Neapolitan pegasus girl. That was just great, that horse girl hated you and would kill you if she found you. Abilene looks forward to see Whitney searching for you. "Whitney?" asks Abilene. "What are you doing?" Whitney just let out a snort. "Sylvia got out. The little bitch."

Abilene let out a neigh of angry and lowered her cowgirl hat. "Out to steal my Stephen, no doubt. Don't worry Whitney, as soon as I spot her..." Abilene stomps her hoof on the ground and you shiver from your spot on the fan. Whitney just looks in horror. "Abilene!" she yells. "What are you saying? That's barbaric!" Whitney scoffs and then goes back to looking for you. "How competitive can you get? Stephen doesn't even know Sylvia exists." "Easy for you to say," says Abilene. "You're hitched, Whitney. You didn't have to worry about any competition when he came to Xander." "Sweetie," says Whitney. "There was no competition."

You just had to lay in wait on the fan and the wererhino and the pegasus would leave you be. But then Abilene lets out a pant. "Ugh," she says. "It's hotter in here than a dragon's lungs." You gasp because Abilene walks forward and presses the switch to turn on the fan. You scream as the fan moves at rapid speed and hold onto the blade you're on, but the fan moves too fast and you're sent screaming and spinning off the fan.

You remarkably survive the fall, but from the looks of it, you landed in a monster's cleavage, but whose?

You have the following choices:

1. Whitney

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2. Abilene

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