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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1958231
Can you help these poor mice survive, or will your decisions be the death of them?
This choice: Save her!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Now you've done it...

    by: Flynn-Coyote Author IconMail Icon
         No matter how strong your survival instinct screamed at you to run, you felt too responsible to simply abandon Kierra to this horrible fate. Even if you can't save her, the least you can do is stop her from suffering through this alone.
         'Stop!' You cried out, feeling your legs turn to jelly after a few steps forward.
         '...Excuse me?' Solace paused, holding her prey in just the same spot as she was mere inches from her lips. 'That sounded like you were giving me a... an order?' Her eyes narrowed and she looked between you and Kierra with a sly grin. 'Looks like my snack just turned into a light breakfast.'
         'Gertrude help me!' Kierra screamed, doing her best to squirm free of Solace's grip to no avail. With your focus momentarily on her, Solace took you by surprise. With one clean bound, she had leaped clear of her bed and landed on the floor directly before you.
         'Aaah!' Your cry quickly became a bout of rapid panting as you fell on your backside with Solace looming above you. You tried to scoot backwards, to spin on the spot and get to your feet but it was too late. You didn't manage a single step before something snagged your tail and lifted you into the air with a disorienting lurch.
         'Now this is a treat.' Solace purred, falling back onto her bed and rolling onto her side. 'So you two know each other I see? Aren't you glad I'm gonna let you both go in together?'
         'What?! Noo!' Kierra cried out again, this time breaking into sobs straight after. Your senses finally returned and you saw that you were in Solace's other hand, trapped with a terrifying view of her giant hungry expression as she loomed over you both. You could see Kierra now as well, still in the leona's grip and once more being pulled towards the giant cat's parting lips. Solace licked Kierra slowly. Once, then twice. You'd seen Solace eat micen before, always a terrifying sight but it was usually quick. This time she was being deliberately slow, no doubt enjoying your terror at seeing your companion go first.
         'Solace... isn't there some way we can work this out?' You begged. Her grip tightened momentarily on you as she turned towards you. She leaned in close and inhaled your scent before a blast of hot air washed back over you. Your eyes squeezed shut under the force, opening a second later to see your view of her face had been replaced with a wall of wet pink flesh. 'Ghaaah!' You failed to hide your disgust as she ran her tongue over your upper body and face.
         'Hmm... Maybe there is.' She replied. 'But I need just a little more time to decide... You understand, this is after all the kind of choice I only get to make once for each of you.' There was a tense few seconds of silence as she switched her gaze between the two of you. She lowered Kierra to her belly and rested her hand, holding the girl prisoner while her focus returned to you. Solace grinned and loosened her grip slightly, letting you fall for a moment before her fingers caught you by your tail and began to lift you over the leona's head. You began to tremble and shake your head in terror as that enormous maw opened again, getting larger by the minute until you were re-acquainted with the disgustingly wet and warm embrace of her tongue.
         'Solace?!' Had her words moments ago meant nothing? Your eyes watered as she exhaled, moaning softly with her tongue curling around your form. The view before you was horrifying, loose strands of saliva hanging between her tongue and palate, her dark throat framed by pulsing fed flesh and her uvula trailing another string of drool into her throat behind. You closed your eyes and tried to block out the disgusting sounds that surrounded you.
         It was no use. Every shift in her tongue under you, slamming you into her cheek or the hard roof of her mouth made a sickening wet smack or slurp that resounded in your ears. Her delighted moans were torturous, reminding you that no matter what else you were, by dint of birth, delicious to leona taste buds.
         Suddenly there was cold air on your back, and light behind your eyelids. You opened your eyes, almost hyperventilating as the sight of her throat flexing and pining for you once more filled your vision. You felt her fingers grasp you by your foot and pull you loose. The air was cold on your drool soaked fur but it was a welcome sign that you weren't about to descend into her pitiless stomach to be digested alive. The smile on Solace's face was chilling. She gave you a warm look, dropping you to her belly and imprisoning you beneath her hand before lifting Kierra to her mouth and subjecting her to the same torture you had just endured.
         'Solace, stop, please!' You begged. 'This is... This isn't fair!' Solace raised her eyebrow at you but continued to suckle and slurp on Kierra's body for a few more minutes, just as she had with you. When Kierra's time was up, she once more fell onto Solace's fur beside you with a wet plop followed by the leona's hand clasping her in place.
         Now you were being lifted into the air once again, meeting Solace's glare as she spoke. 'Well, you at least seem slightly interested in saving your friend. She spent the whole time you were in my mouth just begging for herself. It's a pity to see loyalty go unrewarded like that isn't it?'
         'What?' You squirm, unable to see Kierra's face from the angle Solace held you.
         'Oh yes.' The leona continued. 'She even said I should let her go, since I had you now. And you are a better fed, slightly larger specimen, so she had a point.' Her hand wavered a bit, giving you a few seconds to glance down at Kierra. The micen wouldn't meet your eyes.
         'No...' You didn't know what to think. You were only in this mess because of her, you risked your life for her knowing damn well it could all be for nothing! And this was how she repays your loyalty?
         'So...' Solace grinned, bringing your gaze back to her. 'How about... you feed that disloyal little runt to me like an obedient little servant, and if you do well I'll let you have that as a full time job?'
         'G-Gertrude don't!' Kierra cried up at you. 'It's a trick! I never said those awful things! I wouldn't! You're... You're my best friend...'
         You couldn't see her again, Solace's hand was back in its original spot. The leona just looked back at you impassively, waiting for your answer with a raised eyebrow.

Kierra...

You have the following choices:

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1. ...That lying bitch!

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2. ...She's just a poor scared girl

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