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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Comedy · #1946404
What trouble can a human get into while working at a newspaper for giant monsters?
This choice: Tara takes you back to the Daily Tombstone  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

The New You

    by: Unknown
You cross your fingers and hope that Tara really doesn't consider leaving you with this mad doctor who literally took you apart and put you back together. She seems to actually consider it and Tara gives an evil smirk your way as you shiver. "Actually, Doc,' she says with an evil thrill in her voice. "I think I'll take him back with me to the Daily Tombstone. I want to see how his girlfriend reacts to the new him."

You let out a sigh of relief. "Alright," says Dr. Sinew. "Just try to be careful with him until his bones fully set in. Those scars are still fresh." Tara grabs you and then walks out as you struggle in her grip. She's sure to place you in a jar in the glove compartment so you don't cause any trouble. You couldn't believe this. How were you supposed to explain this to Mazee? You feel your wings twitching and it is driving you crazy. All your new scars are itching and it feels as though you're going to fall apart. You moan in pain and then let out a scream as your eyes kept flipping from normal to darkened iris mode. It's fitting you were turned into a fallen angel because this hurts like hell.

Tara only stops once and its to reload her car with gas. Outside, there are four male monsters including a gremlin, a phoenix and a Thetis Lake monster all ogling her and her new face as she smiles seductively. Guess she was starting to attract men again. You heard that Tara was considered the most beautiful face in the Daily Tombstone before her face was burned.

Suddenly you grab your ears because you can hear something from several monster kilometers away. They sounded like police sirens. "Hands in the air!" Then you hear several gun noises and scream before you hear something else. There were moaning noises. "Harder. Damn, it's like you're not even trying." You pant slightly before you hear a sound that sounded like the laugh of the Cryptkeeper. "Make it stop!" you yell. Your ears were being assaulted by several sounds all at once. Tara looked in amusement as you were holding your ears.

Tara was driving again and the sounds just didn't stop. "You lying two-faced bitch! We've been together for ten years and then you pull this on me! And with a freakin' spriggan for the love of Ra!" You begin to cry before you hear something else that sounds like a baby's crying. "Congratulations. Four heads. She's gonna be a healthy hydra." You bang your face on the glass You wished you were death. Who knew fallen angels had such acute hearing.

Tara then takes you out as she parks the car and you hear several wolf whistles at once from passersby. "Hubba, bubba. Look at that can." "Forget the can, look at that face." "That girl can suck my blood any day." You then hear several sounds coming from inside the tower. First sounded like it was Aurelia's voice. "I told Cree one hundred times, I want nothing to do with that damned sister of hers. I don't care if it is her parents' anniversary. I'd rather eat a bowl of spider webs than go to any town that's home to that bigoted piece of..." You cover your ears but then you hear Beth and Fate speaking.

"Fate," says Beth. "Have you lost weight lately? Girl, please tell me you're only going to maintain your weight from here. I mean, there are a lot of gargoyle guys who like big girls." "Fat, thin, I really don't care how I look, Beth. Mom would kill any man that comes after me anyway. Perhaps you should think about losing weight." "Are you kidding?" asks Beth. "I'm a behemoth. I'm supposed to be fat.

You then hear Yulong on the phone. "I don't know what you're making a big deal of, James," says Yulong. "Topaz is 16, I'd say she's ready to date." "But Mom," says Yulong's son on the phone. "Your granddaughter is dating a European dragon." "James," says Yulong. "I know that western dragons are... less than desirable in behavior... but George sounds like a nice guy. I didn't complain when you married Hay Lin." "Mom, Hay Lin is the same type of dragon as you and me." You then let out a grunt before Tara takes you out of your jar and grasps you in her hand. "Oh," she says. "Let's show them the new us."

Tara walks in and all eyes are on her and her face. Grace nearly chokes on her Chinese food at the sight and Yulong even holds down the phone. "James," she says. "I'm going to have to call you back." Emma squints to get a good look at Tara and then gasps. "Tara," says Harley. "You look spicy, chica." Harley even lets out a squeal of delight. You always knew the sow was a lesbian. "Wow," says Mazee. "Your face looks amazing, Tara." "I agree mate," says Willa. "It looks like how it did before Tim... burned it off." "I take it the mission was a success?" asks Lexi as she walks in." Tara twirls her hair and smiles. "Mission accomplished."

Mazee then smiles nervously. "Now, Tara," she says. "I hope there's no hard feelings between you and Tim now." Tara gives a laugh and then unfolds her hand to show your new look. Everyone looks at you in surprise and Lexi bursts into laughter as Mazee stares in pure shock. "Jumping dingos!" yells Willa as her jaw drops. "Is that Tim?" asks Emma as she squints her eyes. "Aye carumba," says Harley. "Look at those wings." Grace bends over and gets a good look at your wings as she licks her lips. Blake lets out a purr. "Now that's a canary I wouldn't mind eating up." Beth smiles at you as well. "I always knew he had the face of an angel." Says the behemoth as she shakes her hips. "That's a fallen angel," says Bea. "Trust me, I'm a succubus. I know."

You look nervously. "It's not so bad having wings, Tim," says Fate as she holds down her own wings. "If they get in the way, you can always fold them down into a cape." Cleotiti smiles nervously and even strokes you. Guess that now you're not completely human, she finds you less scary to her. Yulong is completely silent. It seems that even she can't give you any appropriate advice for this situation. Ari simply smiles at you smugly as Aurelia looks uneasily. "I'm going to get back to work," she says. "Angel food never agreed with me anyway." Hecate stops to draw your new form as Brandy rubs her single eye in surprise. Kiki of course couldn't care less and Anna Maria bends over to get a good look at you.

"Tim?" asks Mazee as Tara hands you to her. "Is that you." You smile at your girlfriend nervously. "So how do you like the new me, Baby?"

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1. She's Okay with It

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