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Can a human prisoner survive in a jail built for giant monsters? Keep it a fantasy please
This choice: It's Visiting Hours, Escape on a Guest  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Let's Make a Deal

    by: Unknown
You looked at the clock and remembered that it was visiting hours, where friends and family of inmates could visit and see how they are doing. Since you had neither, you never got a visitor. But this gave you an idea. You could hitch a ride on one of the visitors and get out that way. Smiling, you head to the visitors center.

The visitors center was surprisingly empty. Usually is was packed. You hid behind a trash can and looked. You could only see three visitors: a vampire talking to Darcy, another kitsune talking to Elaine, and a blue succubus sitting in front of an empty booth. Deciding the first two would get you spotted, you went for the succubus.

You make your way over to her and start climbing up her shoe, which thankfully had an untied lace. You were almost to her ankle when you heard a voice.

"I was wondering when you'd show up."

You look up to see the succubus staring at you. You gulp. You're up s**t creek without a paddle now. She bent down (not easy, since from the looks of it, she had Lactose Overload Syndrome) and picked you up. She set you down on the counter and smiled.

"You caught me. Big whoop. So what, you gonna turn me in?" You ask, angry.

"Yes, but not just yet. I actually came to visit you." The succubus replies.

You were honestly surprised. "Really? I never get a visitor."

"Yeah, I'm here because I have a deal for you. I can get you out of this prison."

Your jaw dropped. She could do that? You'd be free? "How?" You ask.

"Simple. I'm a succubus. So I can use magic to give you whatever you want. But I'll want something in return, at a later date. Just say the words."

She barely finished her sentence before you spoke. "I want Destiny to let me out of this prison. I want her to decide I don't belong here."

The succubus smiled and snapped her fingers. "Done. In a few moments, you'll be a free man."

You could almost jump for joy. Finally, you'd be out of this hell hole. You were so happy you didn't care that the succubus had told Cree, who was nearby, you had escaped. Cree walked over and picked you up.

"Why are you so happy?" She asked.

Before you could answer you both heard a voice.

"Stop, Cree."

You both turn and see Destiny in the door. When you saw her, you saw that she looked...

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. Angry. As usual.

*Noteb*
2. Calm. That's a First.

3. Lovestruck. The Hell?

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