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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1933968
One day, a girl wakes up and realizes she can control... EVERYTHING!
This choice: Sarah was sitting next to you  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Honest critique

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"I hear this movie is gonna be good."

"AHH!"

Looking to the right, Sarah looked on at you with an innocent smile. How she got that close to you was a mystery, since only 20 second prior, when scanning the theatre, the seat was empty.

"S...Sarah? What are you doing here?"

"What? I can't watch a movie in a public theatre?" she asked innocently, eating popcorn from a jumbo tub, which also wasn't present a few seconds prior. All of this was starting to become a bit too much.

"OK, Sarah, I told you already, we need space. You're too..."

"Gorgeous? Understanding? Loving?" she asked, holding your hand.

"Clingy!" you shouted as said hand was pulled away, only to earn a few exclamations of "Shhh!" from the audience. "I mean, what was up with that trailer?"

"What trailer?"

"Don't play dumb, the Fast and Furious trailer with you, huge, and..."

"Just watch the movie," she reassured with a smile. I'm sure you'll like it."

Sighing heavily, you leaned back into the seat, occasionally glancing at the other people in the audience. None of them seemed the least bit surprised or concerned at the film content.

The film began, the usual exposition from a bunch of scientists and other supporting characters, when the lead appeared on the screen.

Sarah.

It wasn't an actress with an uncanny resemblance. It was Sarah. Same strawberry blonde hair, same dimples, same cute grin as she looked over a formula on screen filled with science goo, there was no mistaking it. Looking over to your right, the real Sarah munched her popcorn, intently viewing the action.

Luckily for the audience, that didn't take long. From what you could gather of the plot, Sarah (yes, the character in the film was referred to as such, making it even more eerie) was an intern at this medical facility, or something. Long story short, she got splashed in the science goo, and began growing at the rate of a foot every hour, with her growth rate speeding up after each spurt. The once shy (in the movie anyway) girl immediately began taking a liking to her new size, using it to tease the scientists in the area before deciding that the quarantine was far too cramped for her, heading into the nearest town.

This wasn't so bad. It was your standard monster movie, with elements of comedy and drama, the special effects were amazing, hell, if the woman didn't look exactly like Sarah, you would just sit back and accept that someone finally made a good giant woman movie without horrible special effects, horrible acting, or an overly forced feminist message.

And then the scene switched to Sarah looking outside someone's house. Your house to be specific. And the actor on the screen was you, looking on at the giantess sneaking out.

"OK, this has gotten too weird!" you shout, ready to walk out. However, Sarah grabs your hand, looking pleadingly on at you.

"Oh come on, it's not even halfway over! It's really good so far!"

"You can stay, but we're not dating, and I'm freaked out," you answer, again pulling your hand away. "So I'm leaving."

Despite your confusion, there isn't the slightest hint of anger on Sarah's face. She just tilts her head cutely, and sits back down. "I promise you won't regret it."

What did Sarah know that you didn't? You're pretty sure that if she became an actress and starred in a major motion picture, you would know. This was all too weird.

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. You walks out the door, only to find out you're in the film!

*Noteb*
2. You stay, and see more of the film

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