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A magic laptop lets you edit other people
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Chapter #5

Cute and Perky

    by: sharpshooter Author IconMail Icon
You selected Cute and Perky, and scanned the list of candidates. One name in particular stood out. Ashley Swan was your age, but cute and always energetic. She was very outgoing and very friendly. She had an athletic build, long blonde hair and hazel eyes. She always wore tight shirts and shorts with sneakers. You selected her name and set to editing her profile.

You found that she loved puppies, and deep down she wished she was one. So you changed her perception, the way others would perceive her, from cute girl, to cute puppy. Since she already had a great mind and great body, you didn't feel the need to change much. You just enhanced her figure and natural beauty (so she didn't need makeup to look movie star gorgeous). You made her naturally trust you, and as a final touch, you added the hypnotic trigger 'Doggy Speak' that would make her talk like a dog, and 'Girl Speak' that would have her talking normal again. You looked at the time and saw it was still early, so you saved the changes, closed the laptop, and decided to go to the mall.

On the way in, you saw Ashley walk into the pet shop, so you followed her in. You were about to approach her, when someone else did.

"Hey, the dogs need to stay in their cages." said one of the store workers, and he grabbed Ashey's arm and started pulling her towards the canine section.

Seeing an opportunity, you intervened.

"I'm so sorry, that one's mine. She must have wandered in here by mistake. I'm really sorry." you said to the store worker

He stopped and looked at you, then Ashley, then back at you. He released Ashley, and she ran int your arms.

"Kids these days." he shook his head and walked away

Once he was gone, you turned your gaze to Ashley. She was staring at you with big, wide eyes.

"Will you take responsibility?" she asked

"What do you mean?" you asked

"When you said I was yours, your pet. Did you really mean it? Can I be your puppy?" she asked

"If you want." you replied

She squealed in delight, and wrapped you in a tight hug.

"Thank you, Master. Thank you so much." she cried

"You're welcome. Now let's get you some stuff." you said

The you led her around the store, picking out toys, and other essential things. Soon, it was time to go.

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