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What would you do if you were granted the power to manipulate the world around you?
This choice: Mess with your older brother  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Mess with your older brother

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You feel giddy at the thought of having these awesome reality-changing powers, which were just given to you for no reason at all, without any price or anything. Not only that, but you have the ability to change or control whatever you want without having to bear any responsibility for the changes! How cool is that for a teenage girl?

You open the bedroom door, and you walk out the hall. The first door on the right is that of your older brother Matt, who is usually studying, playing video games, eating, or sleeping. He’s lazy, boring and nerdy. Why, you can totally change him now, right? Make him into somebody COOL! His door is locked, as always! Ha! That won’t stop you!

You decide to snap your fingers and teleport yourself into his bedroom.

SNAP!

You disappear and pop in in his bedroom, on the other side of the door, where he is sitting in front of his computer when he stops and gives you a startled look.

“AAAARGHK! ASHLIE! How did hell did you get in here?” he shouts at you, as he was scrolling through his Instagram feed on his phone. “My door was LOCKED!”

You snap your fingers again and his cell phone is instantly in your hand. You look at the screen and you see nothing, but pictures of a few teen bodybuilders mixed in with a few occasional sexy girls posing in the gym.

“Soooo… You got a thing for muscle gals and guys… Huh, Matty?” you giggle as you hand him back his phone.

“NO! Give that back. That’s not true!” he insisted.

“Don’t lie to me, big bro! I saw it on your Instagram. You love muscle girls and boys!” you laugh at him.

“SHUT UP, Ashlie!” Matt growls as he puts his phone in his desk drawer.

“Be honest! Don’t lie to me… or else!” you threaten him.

“Or else… WHAT?” he shouts back.

“Or else… THIS!” you say firmly as you will for your big brother to become aroused and for him to have an orgasm… right there and then.

“UUUUUUUUUHHHH!!!” Matt began to moan loudly as his balls began to churn while his cock became rock hard while you looked on with a big grin on your face.

“You know, Matty… You could have made things much easier on yourself by working with me… But, since I have these cool reality-altering powers, I will give you a taste of what I can do… I’m in complete and TOTAL CONTROL over your body, including your cock and balls… So, how about an orgasm, my dear big brother of mine?” you say coolly as you up the ante and decide to make Matt blow a load all over his bed.

“No… PLEASE… Ashlie… NO! STOP! Arrgghhhhh!!!” Matt groans loudly as his cock flops out of his shorts and blows a massive load of cum all over his bed…. A huge, thick, two-minute-long stream of white, sticky, salty cum which covers his entire bed! After a minute or so, Matt collapses on the floor, only to stand up, sweating, panting and gasping for air.

“Ohmygosh… Uhhhh…. That… was… incredible…” he moans as he is barely able to stand on his legs. He sits on the edge of his bed as you look on. “How… How… did you… do that?”

“You never listen to me, big brother! I have the power to alter reality!” you say to him. “I can control EVERYTHING!”

Matt just stares at you with his mouth wide open.

“Oh, wow… Holy shit…”

“So, I’m gonna be the sweet little sister…” you say as you sit down next to your big brother, who is now naked, hot and sweaty. “So, what are you biggest, deepest, darkest desires, big bro of mine?”

“I… Uhh… Oh, God… Ummm… Oh, man… “ Matt groaned as he pondered your question. “That’s a loaded question.”

You quietly wish to learn the answer to Matt’s fantasies and desires.

“Ohhh… If you don’t tell me, then I might have some ideas!” you say to him with a smile. “I guess you would love for me to change you in such a way that…”

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