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What's it like as predator, instead of prey?
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Chapter #4

Bye bye Susan.

    by: manubestofplus Author IconMail Icon
*an addition by: Enigma the Fox*

She squeals and runs, laughing as she darts under her bed. You dramatically stomp after her, grinning.

"I'm a big monster, and I'm coming to gobble you up! Come back, little Susan! Grrr!"

She laughs harder, trying to scoot farther back as you get down on your hands and knees to peer under the bed. Stretching an arm out, you close a hand around one of her ankles. She shrieks in laughter, thinking it all great fun.

"Noooo! Don't gobble me miss Monster! Nooooo!"

Her skin is soft under your fingers. Ever so tempting. You can't help licking your lips as you drag her out into your arms. She struggles about, but not too hard. It's only a game, right? Without really thinking on it, you pull off her shoes, socks, and then her dress. Now she really starts to squirm.

"Hey! Mary, what are you doooiing?! You don't need to take my clothes off!"

"Actually, I do. See, I AM going to eat you, and I don't think they'd taste too good!"

Her eyes widen in fright, but really...she still thinks you're just trying to scare her. Her tender, pink, nude body shivers in your hands. It looks so sweet, you can't hold back any longer. She gives out the start of one last startled scream as you push her entire head...into your mouth? It doesn't even hurt! You just...stretch, jaws openly accomodating the offered food. Her yelling is muffled, and a delightful flavor washes over your tongue from her face. Holding her arms tight with hardly any effort, you think you feel her kicking at you, but it doesn't do her any good.

You've got to have more. You've got to fill your stomach. You swallow, hard, and are amazed to feel your neck bulge as her head is pulled down your throat. The feelings are amazing! Her legs keeps kicking, as you swallow again and pull her smooth chest over your lips and down your throat. The slight childish paunch of Susan's belly now resides in your mouth, and you tease her navel with the tip of your tongue. Immediately you feel an answering giggle inside your chest, and smile around her waist. You tilt your head back, moving your hands from her soon-to-be-eaten wrists to her flailing ankles. Her legs keep spasming, but she can't break your grip. With the help of gravity, things become much easier. The next gulp takes not only your sister's little rump and hips, but her thighs as well! You can feel her beginning to curl up in your expanding stomach, and with a last loud slurp your pull in her the rest of her legs. Her feet wriggle in your mouth for a few seconds, and you swallow them too. Your belly now hangs out well beyond your shorts, showing the occasional lump as Susan squirms and struggles inside. It feels wonderful, and you're full finally. Yet...all you can think of is your next meal, as you sit on her floor listening to the gurgling of your belly.

Half an hour later, your gut is almost back to normal. The only sign that Susan was here with you is a pile of empty clothes on the floor around you. It cost your your sister, but what a meal she made...and you don't feel so hungry now. Still, you somehow know you will again later. So....who will fall prey to you then?

You have the following choices:

1. Go to your Mother for advice.

2. Go to your boyfriend for help.

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