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18-year old Brian is given the ability to enhance any and every woman around him.
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Chapter #5

Soon Yi

    by: Marknew Author IconMail Icon
Four foot eleven inch Soon Yi stood at the door, impatiently tapping her foot on the step.  Sharon was so undisciplined.  She was supposed to call her as soon as she had gotten Brian to help with her science homework, so that Soon Yi could join them.  Now that Brian and Claire had broken up, this was her big chance to make an impression on Brian, and Sharon had promised to help.

Soon Yi was short, almost doll-like in her appearance.  Her dark hair was precisely laid out across the top if her forehead and cut perfectly even around her head.  Her clothing was always crisply pressed.  She never wore blue jeans outside her home, and nearly always wore dresses or long, modest skirts to school.  The only exception was during gym class or gymnastics competitions, but there again her uniforms were cleaned and pressed daily, and her gymnastics tights were bright, well-fitted and in perfect repair.  Soon Yi could not understand why so many of her classmates and even adults who should know better failed to appreciate the importance of good appearance, but she tried not to judge them too harshly.  Unfortunately, this was one of the few tasks at which she usually failed.

After a long delay and frantic whispering, Brian opened the door.  Soon Yi gave him her best post-vault smile.  “Hi Brian! How are you!”

Brian blushed, “Um, now is not really ....”

“Isn't Sharon home?  She said I should come over.” Soon Yi said, politely waiting to be invited inside, while peering past Brian.  She could see movement.

“Yes, but ....”

That was all Soon Yi needed.  “Hello Sharon?  Did you finish your homework?” she asked loudly, happily slipping past Brian.  He was so cute!  She would just have to teach him how to be more decisive.

“I did, Soon Yi,” she called from the kitchen.  “I'll be right there.  Sorry.  Something happened.”  Soon Yi looked up as Sharon entered the room.  Up and up and up.

“Sharon?  This isn't you is it?” she said in amazement.  Her jaw dropped as her eyes rose higher and higher along the powerfully built body walking toward her and down along the round, bulging arms and then back toward her face.  Soon Yi frowned.  “Ha ha.  Funny joke.  Sharon, come out.  Who is this?  A cousin, maybe, because she looks so much like you?”  She looked at Brian.  He would not be able to keep up the joke, but there was nothing in his face to betray it.

“I told you this was a bad idea, Sharon.”

He called her Sharon.  Soon Yi looked at the powerful girl again as the girl smiled, looking harder, for the soul of her friend inside the massive body.  

“Soon Yi!” Sharon said and picked her friend up and held her. Soon Yi wasn't at all the “kissy-huggy” type and tried to push her away but all the strength in her gymnast arms was nothing compared to Sharon’s.  “Oooh, such a SWEET little Soony!”  Sharon squealed in a high-pitched baby voice and started kissing her on the cheeks.

“Stop ... it ... Sharon!”  Soon Yi insisted between kisses as her face got redder and redder.  “You know ... I ... don't like ... this!”

Sharon stopped and put her friend back on the floor.  “You called me Sharon.”

“Ok.  Yes.  You're Sharon,” she admitted, still cross.  “But I am still angry with you.  Brian, you tell me.  What happened to Sharon?  How did she get so big?”

“And so strong.”  Sharon added.

Brian hesitated.  “It’s not something ... I want to ....”

“Oh Brian!  This is Soon Yi!”

“Yes, I know, but ....”

“It’s a secret, but I'm telling you,” Sharon was saying while Brian was shaking his head more and more vigorously.  “Brian has a power, a really special power.”

“You do, Brian?  Oh, I'm so happy for you!”  Soon Yi said enthusiastically.  She bounded over to him, hoping he would reciprocate her excitement, but he just kept shaking his head at Sharon and didn't even look down at Soon Yi.  How she hated being so short.  “So, Brian, your sister is now a lot bigger than she was and very, very strong with big muscles, but you look the same.  What is YOUR power?  Are you maybe very smart now?”

Sharon giggled.  “No,” she said, resisting the temptation to say she was now the smarter one too.  “It’s kind of a funny power.”

“Shut up, Sharon!”

“Oh, come on, Brian, have a sense of humor.  It is funny.  Just admit it.  Tell Soon Yi about your power.  Come on, tell her.  Tell her, or I will.”

“Oh yes, please tell me, Brian.  I would really like to hear it from you!”  Soon Yi pleaded, her eyes as large as she could make them.  

Brian grimaced.  “All right, what’s the point, if she’ll tell you anyway.  This ancient goddess, Myridia, appeared to me in a dream.”

Soon Yi looked startled.  “Mee-lee-dee-ya,” she repeated carefully, reverently, bowing her head quickly, and then looked up at Brian more intently, waiting for him to go on.

Brian hesitated, but somehow Soon Yi's stillness gave him no room not to continue.  “She gave me a power, to enhance women, anyone I chose, in any way I wanted.”  

Sharon and Brian looked at Soon Yi, waiting for her reaction, but there was none.  

“That is very interesting.  So,” she said, finally.  “You have this power now.  Are you going to use it?”

“He HAS used it, Soon Yi,” Sharon reminded her.

“Yes, but he should use it again.  That is what it is for,” she insisted, crossing her arms in front of her chest.  “I would like to be enhanced too.  I am sure that would please the Goddess.”

“If there really is a ’Goddess’,” Sharon countered.  “There could be a scientific explanation.”  Brian nodded.

Soon Yi just smiled.  “You must be a very scientific family.  My family is more superstitious, more primitive.  Come on, Brian.  You should try to enhance me too.  Make me more beautiful.  Make me a better gymnast.  You just make me whatever you like me to be.”

Brian looked at Sharon.  “Go on, Brian,” she said.  “I think those are great ideas she has.  You can practice your power with Soon Yi.”

Brian decided he would try to enhance her by making her more attractive and a better gymnast as she had asked.  He focused his mind, while Soon Yi bowed her head and said a few words in a language he could not understand.  Was he having any effect?  It didn't appear to be working. He focused harder and heard that amazing voice in his head, the same voice he heard in his dream.

“Good, Brian.  I think you are beginning to understand how to use the great power I have given you.  Do not hold back.  Let it flow.”

The voice was mesmerizing, hypnotic, seductive, and irresistible.  Brian wanted to do what she asked, he wanted to please her.  He wanted that more than anything.

“Oh Brian, you’re doing SO well!  Won’t you show me what you can do?  You need to show me that you've learned to use it, so I know I've chosen you correctly.”

Brian wanted to justify her choice and tried to sense the flow of the power.  It seemed to originate somewhere deep inside him, from a place he could not name, but he felt it pour through his heart, his head and his hands.  The more he focused on it the stronger and more pleasurable the flow was.  It was almost orgasmic, almost ....

“Brian!  Brian!  Are you all right?”

Sharon’s voice broke the spell.  He opened his eyes.  Myridia’s voice had left him.  The feeling stopped.  He looked around.  Soon Yi’s eyes were closed, but her usually concentrated, impassive face was softer, with a delicate smile.  

“Mmmmm, Brian, thank you,” she said, in a voice nearly as melodious as Myridia’s.  He looked at her. Her formerly inexpressive face was alive with color and animation.  She wore no mark-up, but her lips were bright red, her cheeks and infinite gradation from pale to deep flush, her rich brown eyes seemed large enough to swallow him whole, unless her perfect rows of teeth chopped him up first.  He realised she was taller, not nearly as tall as Sharon, or even himself, but she was nearly five inches taller, enough to be sexy, but still a good height for a gymnast.  She still has the broad shoulders, thick arms and muscular, chest, abs and legs of a gymnast. In fact they were thicker and more muscular than before.  But her formerly flat, narrow-hipped torso was now curvy, and her solid, athletic pose now was supply and liquid.  She kept changing position, subtly revealing new poses and curves as she drew him closer.  “You keep looking at me, like never before, Brian.  Do you like me now?” she purred, twisting her ass and resting her hand on her hip.

“You are sexy as all hell, Soon Yi!” Sharon exclaimed.  “How can he NOT look at you!  I can hardly turn away,” she added.

“That's good,” she said, running her hand up to her waist and then down to the top of her legs.  “And I think now I will be the best gymnast too.  The room was too small to do a floor exercise, but she casually leaned over and did a handstand, holding herself easily on one arm while bending her body forwards and then backwards, and then held a split with her legs split vertically and her toes grazing the ceiling.  Brian could not stop staring at her longer, sexier legs and Sharon bent her leg toward him, still balanced on one hand, and ran her foot down the front of his body, though modestly avoiding his crotch.  “I think the way you pay me attention now is very nice, Brian.  Your power is very, very good.  Now you should ..

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