This choice: Jeff failed to fill out the Chronivac right, and it tries to auto-correct... • Go Back... Jeff got up that Saturday morning, wondering where your soon-to-be twin sis was, Jeff found her down by the dinner table, eating a bagel. She's shed a lot of weight overnight, and she seems to be up to 10 years old. Oddly, her clothes still fit her, but what he noticed is that she's wearing shorts. The old fat Kate would never dream of wearing shorts.
"Hey, mom!! Some of my friends are going to the mall. Can i go too?"
"I'm busy today... but if your brother can take you, I won't mind."
She turns to Jeff and asks, and he tells her he has nothing better to do today. This of course, was all so he can keep an eye on her to watch her changes.
Arriving at the mall in his car, Jeff sees Kate's friends, Elizabeth, Meredith, Felicity, and Alice... wait, that's strange. They look older too. Not to mention Elizabeth, Meredith, and Felecity were previously sorta bookish, and Alice quite the tomboy, but they all seemed to be dressed more... girly? Elizabeth was in a lavender t-shirt, overalls, and sneakers, Meredith decked out in a frilly green tank top w. Hello Kitty on it, jeans, and crocs, Felecity in a floral-print sundress and sandals, and Alice was wearing a plain white tee, denim shorts, and tennis shoes.
"Alright girls, stay with me." Jeff tells them, leading them in. "What are we doing first?"
"I wanna go to the bookstore." Meredith tells Jeff
"I kinda wanna go to the Arcade." Alice responds.
"I think I want to go do a little clothes shopping, I suppose." Felecity uttered meekly.
"I for one want to head for the food court." Elizabeth declared.
Kate stayed silent, Jeff noticing her watching a couple of boys her age go by.
"Hey, Kate!!"
"Oh, right." she snaps to. "Whatever you guys want. I'm down for anything."
Jeff strokes his chin and says, "Alright, first we'll hit the arcade, then the bookstore, followed by the food court, and finally clothes." He was hoping the girls would blow all their time on the first three, as he wasn't keen on taking... 12 year olds? Sure enough, he saw they were taller and were beginning to develop in the parts where girls do during puberty.
Once at the Arcade, the girls began to play some games, but after a few minutes, all but Jeff and Alice seemed to have lost all interest in the video games. Jeff and Alice were going at it at a fighting game, and at first Alice was whooping Jeff. However, as time went by, it almost seemed like her skills began to diminish, and Jeff won five straight.
"This is a dumb game anyway. Let's go" Alice says. That's when Jeff glances over and notice that the supposed tomboy that was sporting a t-shirt and shorts was now dressed in a light pink tank top and denim skirt, her pixie-cut auburn hair now brushing her shoulders and more of a strawberry blonde, her formerly rough nails now somewhat manicured, and that she was already well-endowed for a 13 year old, able to easily fit into a C-cup. Also, did it seem like her shoes had a slight heel to them?
Heading to the bookstore, the girls at first peruse young lit., fantasy, and sci-fi, the things Jeff had expected hem to gravitate towards, but over the next two hours he saw them lose interest with those books and begin looking at smutty adult romance novels and fashion magazines. Worried he'd get in trouble for letting them read such stuff, he herded the now 14 year-olds out of the bookstore. As he did, he couldn't help but notice that Kate and Meredith, whom had been wearing shorts and jeans before, respectively, had now joined Alice in wearing skirts, and Elizabeth was now fielding short shorts form what used to be overalls. Felicity's dress seemed tighter on her, the pattern faded as the dress itself looked darker. Meanwhile, Alice's denim skirt was now clearly miniskirt, only coming down to mid-thigh, and was now white. More disconcerting to Jeff was the fact that the girls had almost supermodel waists, and now , unless before they had gone in the bookstore, none of them were smaller than a C in the chest department, with Alice and Kate leading the pack at strong DD's.
"Girls... How about we... go... eat something..." Jeff suggested. At this point Jeff knew something had gone wrong, but also remembered what the Chronivac said about preventing changes for three days after the changes finish, so he might as well see this out to the end now.
All the girls order light, taking only salads and smoothies. As he sat and ate his lo mein bowl, he watched Kate and her friends change more, growing into 15 year olds, and saw that now all their skin was lightly bronzed, and all their hair, regardless of what color it used to be, is now all roughly matching shades of platinum blonde. Kate still had her hair in pigtails, but now they made her look slutty instead of cute. Alice, Felicity, and Elizabeth's hair was all flowing loose down to their as-he-watched swelling asses, and Meredith had hers in a ponytail. As Jeff watched them more, he actually witnessed Elizabeth's shorts merge and and join the miniskirt club, becoming a pink pleated tartan number. He was befuddled as he saw them pull out cell phones from tiny designer purses they didn't have moments ago, tick-tacking their french manicured nails on the screens as they texted away. Their chests were rapidly expanding too, as their old shirts gave way, Alice & Elizabeth wearing slutty tube tops that covered the bare minimum of their still growing boobies, as Kate now wore nothing but a itty-bitty bikini top on her now G-cup melons. Felecity seemed about to pop right out of her black leather minidress. At least Meredith seemed the most conservative, wearing a halter top with a heart-shaped hole in the cleavage.
"Like, OMG Kitty? Do you like, see the arms on that guy over there. He could totes bend us over and..." Meredith was saying aloud to your sister. Meanwhile, you see Alice splaying her legs wide open, letting a guy across the court clearly see up her skirt as she licked her lips.
"Alright girls, shopping time!!" Jeff panics, grabbing his sister's wrist.
"Yay!! Shopping!!" they declare in unison. However, instead of going to more PG fare as Jeff hoped, they take over this and drag him to stores catering to girls that looked and sounded like them, that only sold tiny strips of clothes that just barely pass for clothes, and they were buying up a storm... somehow. Was this also the Chronivac's doing?
"Hey Fifi, this halter would totes be hot on you!!" said your sister, whom judging from the girls' inane prattle had been renamed Kitty.
Jeff began to try to block out what was going on, but could tell through it that Elizabeth was now Lila, Meredith was now Mimi, Felicity was now Fifi, and Alice was now Alli.
As their whirlwind shopping wound down, it was clear, they were now turning sixteen, and short of some slight adjustments and a little more breast and hip growth, it seems their changes were over. For whatever reason, Jeff realized his sloppy modification of his sister's data had turned her from a pudgey but studious young girl to this... super bimbo. The stress of what he did finally overwhelmed him.
"Girls, I... I... gotta go to the little boys' room." he hastily says, before ducking into a nearby restroom, leaning against a wall, and hyperventilating for a moment.
:What did I do wrong?" he thought. He wanted to think of what would make the Chronivac think he'd want THIS, then it hit him. He never adjusted her education level, not to mention he left so many fields open. "Then there was the possibility that in conjunction with her low IQ I left her it may have interpreted 'fun to play with' in a lewd light, and bam, bimbo sister... But her friends... Maybe they changed because the Chronivac adapted her friends to stay with her as she got older... Dammit, I should have looked at it better..."
Jeff is suddenly snapped out of his thoughts by the bathroom door opening, the girls coming in.
"Whoa. Girls, you know this is a MEN'S bathroom?"
"We know." Mimi smiles, locking the door.
Suddenly Jeff is taken aback as he watches his sis kneel down, put her head under Lila's miniskirt, and go to town on her as she fingers herself.
"Ka..." Just as he tries to reprimand her, Alli unzips Jeff and finds a surprise erection and takes your length in her mouth. Meanwhile, Fifi proceeds to devour Alli's womanhood.
"Wha... are you?" Jeff tries to muster out, amazed by what a pro Alli is at giving a blow job (even though you have nothing to compare it to).
"We, like, totes wants to thank you for taking us shopping, and like, we haven't sucked a cock ALL DAY." Mimi stated as she kneeled down to down Alli, playing with Jeff's balls.
"Yeah... It was all... totally... like... my idea, bro!!" Kitty told her brother mid-panting.
For a strange reason, when Jeff heard that, it excited him in a strange taboo way, which set him off in Alli's mouth, and she more than happily drank down the white juice.
"Alright girls... Time to head on home." Jeff tells them, his legs quivering.
"Can't we go again?" Alli begged. Jeff waved his hand and zipped up.
As they head out into the parking lot, Jeff thinks, "Well, now that Katie has fully changed, I just have to wait three days, then I undo this and down a gallon of brain bleach."
Suddenly, an epiphany hit Jeff. "I said she was my TWIN sister. If the Chronivac changed her friends just on a wild tangent... Then... What if the Chronivac starts affecting me soon, assuming I meant 'identical twin?!'" A feeling of dread comes over Jeff as he cranks his car.   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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