This choice: Try to make contact by touching the walls. • Go Back...Chapter #4Try to make contact by touching the walls. by: The Swift Gale   As you gaze within the fleshy chamber that was Kirlia's stomach, you can't help but notice the loud gurgles and beating heart emanating in almost all directions. Trying to talk, let alone yell for her would be nearly impossible due to your voice easily being drowned out by the natural sounds of her body. With a somewhat defeated sigh, you try to think of an alternative way of getting the giant pokemons attention. As you floated about the pool of bubbling green liquids on top of your berry raft, you soon turn to the right to notice one of the huge pink walls of flesh closing in. Just then, a great idea pops into your mind. Instead of trying to yell for her, why not just try to pat or touch the walls for her to notice?
With the plan set, you gaze upon the approaching wall determined of escaping within the depths of her belly. However, just when hopes seemed high a sudden change of the current caused by a bubble popping ends up sending you straight towards the middle of her stomach. "w-wait! nonono!" you stammer as you try your best to reach out your hand while keeping balance upon the piece of fruit. To your shock and utter disbelief, you soon found yourself right back where you started on the lake of digestive fluids. Shaking your head in disapproval while clenching your teeth enraged, you kick the surface of the berry to let out your angered emotions. Just as you did however, it almost seemed like the berry along with you began to shift slightly on the stomach juices.
Confused yet curious, you try to repeat the actions once more applying a bit more force to the kick. As your foot made impact on the berry's surface once more, to your surprise the berry began to slightly float it's way in the opposite direction of your kick. With wide eyes and a smile starting to adorn your face, you turn your head back to spot one of the walls not too far off. Immediately, you begin to kick the berry in a rhythmic pattern causing it to slowly approach the pink glistening walls.
Outside, The content Kirlia begins to walk about with a smile on her face. With her appetite satiated by the berry, she decides to go about her day happily. As her head happily bobbed right and left with each step she took, her red eyes soon open as she notices her stomach growling and groaning much more than before. With a confused expression she gazes downwards at her white belly while gently using her right hand to rub it in a circular fashion. While the berry did do a good job filling her up, it seemed to her that it was starting to go against her.
"Almost there." you mutter as the sudden emergence of waves begin to make your travels that much more of a daunting task. With trial and perseverance though, you soon end up floating right before the large wall of flesh. "Yes!" you shout victoriously while panting from your exhausting journey. Filled with eagerness and slight relief, you reach out your hand once more to try and place it upon the slimy wet surface of her stomach wall. However, just then the whole organic chamber begins to shake all about causing your hand to instantly return and grip upon the berry. "w-what's happening!?" You shout aloud as the sounds of thunderous growls and gurgles filled your ears. The Juices below soon begin to rise and fall into waves as if a great storm was approaching as the surrounding walls began to wiggle and writhe about rapidly. Shocked and nervous, you gaze all around you in shear uncertainty.   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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