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Your an 18 year old boy and you shrink around your brother and friends,have fun |
This choice: Put your trust. In Jacob's promise and fall asleep on his chest. • Go Back...Chapter #5Put your trust. In Jacob's promise and fall... by: Suspenser   As you lay on Jacob's chest, you remember how you and him got in his room without him noticing you. Your mind goes into flashback mode you were on Jacob while he was on the couch suddenly you notice your clothes had miraculously shrunk. So you jump off your brother, its amazing he still hasn't noticed you. You put your clothes on and relieved you are no longer naked.
Then you re climb your brother. You notice your brother is snoring what to you sounds like a freight train. It takes 20 whole minutes to cross over his legs because its like walking a tight rope. Though the journey is long you but its worth it so you can go over your bros boxers and and avoid running into his down there business like last time.
You were still traumatized from that experience. After going over his boxers you you are back on his stomach. You jump around on your brothers gut to wake him up but to no avail. Finally you decide to sit down on his stomach until you wake up and hopefully notice you. Then you feel your brother moving. You are about to scream your brothers name but soon you realize he is standing up.
Before you can react you are thrown through the air. At the last minute you grab on to his boxers holding on for dear life. Your brothers footstep are making it extra hard to hold on but you grasp with all your might not daring to let your grip slip. What seems like hours Jacob financially stops and lays down and you lose your grip and fall a few inches you look around and realize you are on Jacobs bed.
You then notice pain coming from your right leg. You look ahead and realize your leg is pinned under your giant brother's thigh. You start to panic pulling at your leg. By a miracle it comes right out due your brothers sweat. You then breath a giant sigh of relief thanking God you are still alive. You could have easily fallen to your death and crushed under Jacobs feet as you you held onto your brother. Or even in bed you could have easily of fallen somewhere else in the bed and splattered into a million pieces by your giant brothers body!!
You then decide to persevere even still and re climb your sleeping big bro this time planning on going face level with him to get a better chance of getting him to notice you. Finally you reach his stomach for a third time pausing to look at your bros face and see his mouth. Your plan is to climb up on his chin and shout his name at his face hopefully waking him up. But you have to be extra careful especially being right next to a giant mouth. If your brother yawns you have to make sure you don't fall in his mouth because you will be eaten for sure. You are about to cross your brothers body when what do you know moves and stands up again. Flashback.
As you lay on your brothers chest you go over three option thinking about what your brother just said. If you escaped you would be free but how would you survive. In a world of giant kids and teens and no adults to control them.. You would probably get eaten by some hungry kid or teen. Or even by your own brothers because you would still have to make it out of the house.
Killing yourself by falling from heights is a terrifying way to die much more than being eaten. Your life as you know it had opened a new permanent tiny chapter. So you decide to stay with Jacob trusting in his promise. You decide to put your life in his hands so you put your head on your bros chest and pull one of his fingers so his hand covers your entire body except your head. You get yourself comfy on your giant brother letting his giant breathing and heartbeat rock you to sleep.
You awake and see sunlight coming through the window. You suddenly feel well rested. Sleeping on your giant brother was the best nights sleep you had ever had. You notice something. Your back is pain free. NO MORE BACK PROBLEMS!! You look over at the digital clock and it say 11:39AM, it was almost noon, you then notice Jacob is still snoring away not as bad as last night. You decide to wait and let him sleep more.
Its the least you can do after he gave you the best sleep of your life. You look over and notice Flin is gone. But your brother Dylan is in the same position as last night snoring louder than Jacob. You decide to lay back down on your brother's chest and wait for him to wake up. You still cant forget how comfortable he is.
Finally at 12:30 you hear Jacob yawn and scoop you up so you are at his face level. "Hey bro how'd you sleep?". You say it was the best ever and thank him for curing your back pain. Your brother is happy for you. Your brother gets up. Then your brother asks you if you and him can have breakfast together. "Y y y y yeah I I I I g g guess". You say nervously. Then your brother looks at you seriously.
"What did I tell you last night. Why would you ever think breakfast is you. Don't you trust me? Look about last night (he assumes you saw him eating people) With all the kids and teens ruining the show we have to find new ways of feeding ourselves. But its only people we hate. I was mad at you and shrunk you. I regret it with all my heart and hope one day you can forgive me. But I still love you even as a tiny and there's nothing that would make me eat you. Even If you and I were the only to people left on earth with nothing to eat I would starve to death. I would even let you eat my flesh so you could stay alive. I would be absolutely devastated If you died."
Then he smiles "Besides you wouldn't taste even close as good as my famous eggs and bacon" saying as he puts on his swim trunks but no shirt. picks you back up putting you on his bare shoulder and you grab around his neck as far as you can. Your mouth begins to water think how good his eggs and bacon and you realize how hungry you are.
You haven't eaten since noon yesterday. You and your brother are headed to the kitchen and on the way see your 9 year brother Flin also shirtless in swim trunks. You finally reach the kitchen and your bro says "Hey Jason why don't you help me?". You say "Sure Ill do what I can". Your bro sets you on the kitchen counter near the stove. He gathers supplies for a well anticipated breakfast.
He almost has everything. "Shoot hey Jason can you hang tight here I think the bacon's in the garage freezer." You wait as your brother goes into the garage. You wait and wait. Suddenly you hear footsteps coming toward the kitchen from the bedroom hallway. Finally a giant boy emerges shirtless in trunks. Its your 12 year old Brother Dylan.
You see him yawn and rub his stomach which is slightly doughy probably from too many donuts. Dylan looks over to the counter. "Aw sweet Jacob must be cooking". You then hear his stomach let out an obnoxious growl. He rubs his stomach and says "I guess I could have a snack in the mean time I'm starving".
Jacob freezes as if in shock and looks right at you. You freeze wondering if that would really hide you. Nope he is coming your way. You don't know what to do finally Jacob reaches the counter bends over crossing arms on the counter to get a closer look at you. "JASON?" He says. "H H H I DD DYLAN" you say now scared crap less. "Dude I cant belive you actually shrunk!". Dylan notices how scared you are. "Hey c'mon there's no reason to be afraid of my I'm your bro". You finally calm do and briefly explain what happen to Dylan.
You then start talking until its dead quite. Suddenly you hear Dylan's stomach growl loudly for 10 whole seconds as he puts a hand to it. You now realize is looking at you hungrily. "Hey Jason I know Jacob is making breakfast but I'm so freakn hungry I need something in my belly now I'm sorry for what I'm about to do". Before you can react Dylan snatches you and takes you up to his face level. "NO DYLAN WHAT ARE YOU F...G DOING!!!" you yell at him. He opens his mouth and starts to lick you with his tongue.
You can't believe it, your own brother was about to eat you!!! Your brother was about to put you in his mouth but at the last second closed it, you reopened your eyes and Dylan started laughing. "OH MY GAWD YOU SHOULD OF SEEN THE TERROR ON YOUR FACE YOU REALLY THOUGHT I WAS ABOUT TO EAT YOU!! C'MON I WOULD NEVER DO A TERRIBLE THING LIKE THAT!"
He takes a napkin and wipes his saliva off you and puts you back on the counter still laughing his butt off. You start to yell "DYLAN THAT WASN'T F..G FUNNY WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU." you scream. You notice a toothpick right next to you and throw it as hard as you can at Dylan's stomach.
"OW S..T, CMON I was only joking around". Finally you get a hold of your self and think was I this weird at 12. Finally Dylan grabs some sour cream and onion principles which are his and your favorite kind. He pulls out a chip and hands it to you. "Peace offering?" he says. You take the chip "Thanks....jerk" you say sarcastically and smile at Dylan. You put out your fist and Dylan fist bumps you knocking you over. "Sorry bro you ok?" he said picking you back up. "Hey Hey I've been through worse". you say. You and Dylan talk about random things. And finally Jacob comes back and says....  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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