This choice: Bryan comes back in Max's dream, • Go Back...Chapter #5Bryan... wakes up? by: Joe   Bryan awoke with a start. Breathing hard. He looked around...
He was in his room... it was still dark in the middle of the night. Everything was were it was suppose to. Bryan looked at his hands: his arms still shaken and covered in a cold sweat!
He was alive.
Max DID not try eat him.
It was all the dream..
Bryan plop down on his pillow with relief.
It was SO real to him! A VERY horrible nightmare. While being awake was a relief to him, even if this world still has him under Max's rule, at least he alive!
He could FEEL the weight of Max's gut on him... the coarse body-hair of it scratching against his skin, the feeling of air leaving his lungs... he could still smell the week of sweat and food Max went through before being swallowed like that and being that foul acid tub that was his step-dad's stomach.
From breathing heavily from his mouth... Bryan began to breath through his nose... and notice a slight stench in the air.
Sniffing it out, he swore that odd smell grew from a faint odd odor to a STRONG smell that was all around him... a smell he knew TOO well...
Byran then notice that while the covers of his bed were the same... the bed itself "felt" odd..
Too warm... wrinkly... and a familiar "coarse" feeling to him...
No, it CAN'T be, though Bryan.
While holding a death grip on the covers, the skinny late teen was hesitant to move them... but then he felt his bed "buckle" underneath him... and getting warmer... and the smell getting worse.
Bryan was frozen in place. He thought, begged, and PRAYED that if he just let this play out, he would REALLY awake from this. He KNOWS what this is... he just didn't want to experience it!
"Well," said a deep voice that Bryan didn't wanted to hear echo ALL AROUND HIM, "If you will get this show going, I WILL!"
A BIG, THICK, HAIRY HAND emerged from the shadow's of Bryan's "room" it grabbed the other end of the kid's covers and with little resistant from the 18-year old's end, the blanket and sheet were removed, making Bryan confront the reality he was in.
He was NOT in his room. It all went away in the darkness!
His bed was NOT a bed at all.. but the base of a MASSIVE uncut penis that would put hippos and elephants to shame and pubes that could engulf you like a hedge-maze!
Bryan KNEW who this was, he saw these things before... Max! The man was VERY casual on hot days... and cold... and warm... and any given day really! And Bryan was on it... on HIM! And as massive as it was, it was GROWING! It was FAR from bunk-bed size now, it was now like a stretch-limo hummer!
Bryan looked at horror as the THING grew beyond his sight... he knew he would regret doing it, but he then turned his head to look above behind him...
And there it was. Wider and bigger than anything he saw before, Bryan saw his stepfather's gut.. and above that, were massive cliffs of muscles that were his pecs, and above THEM was him.
The face of Satan himself if he was pulling off every heavy-set beared look in the world on ONE face... Max himself!
He was the ONLY thing in this world of complete dark NOTHINGNESS! Other than Bryan him self! And BOTH were naked...
Hearing and FEELING Max's bulky frame leaning down towards him, Bryan tried to get up and run away... but despite his size and bulk, the Mountain-ious Max was swift and easily grabbed him in his thick fingers, Byran felt like he was stucked between two flesh colored skyscrappers, feeling EVERY detail of Max's fingers as their hard callous skin pushed down on him both sides.
He was soon brought close to Max's face, his breath as foul as he swallowed Bryan whole...
"This is JUST another dream! This is JUST another dream!" Bryan kept chanting to himself under his breath as his mind was trying to comprehend a giant naked Max before him, "I WILL wake up! I WILL wake up!"
"NOPE!" said Max with a voice thunderous whales, "YOU'RE HERE UNTIL I WAKE UP!"
"W-what!?!" Bryan was in shock!
He then saw Max the mountain melt into a goo form. Byran gasp once freed from pressure, but now stuck swimming a substance that was hot and thick like mud. The substance moved around, disorienting him like a whirlpool... onnly to stumbled around when the goo became soild and was the landmass of this dark void... and from it, rose Max... still built like a gorilla tank, but this time only TWICE as big as he normally as he was to Bryan... the then pressed his massive foot ontop of his stepson, Byran was now reaquinted to Max's thick and heavy hold again.
"This is MY dream... I DID eat you whole. Felt you squirm to the VERY. LAST. BREATH!" explain Max... practically drooling at the last part... and getting hard too from where Bryan can see, though Bryan was more upset by something slightly LESS disturbing to him at the moment
"I-I-I am dead?"
"Yup. And it FELT GOOOOOD" said Max
"But-But- WHY am I here? I should be in HEAVEN!"
"HA!" said Max with such a loud chuckle his stomach swayed. To Bryan, it was like getting hit by a tidal wave of flesh as he felt EVERYTHING on Max moving to it. "Yeah... sorry to say, EVERYTHING I eat like I did with you... I eat EVERYTHING to them... SOULS INCLUDED!"
"Wha-what?" Bryan did NOT like where this is going.
"Your body, mind, and SOUL are mine... FOREVER! Consider this your orientation"
Max then lifted his foot off of Bryan... just to kick him, further down on... Max himself?
Bryan felt like a whole side of his ribs broke from that and saw Max slowing approaching him, like a lion stalking a prey he KNOWS that has no where to go...
"Here, I can do anything to you I want! So how about I..."
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