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Rated: ASR · Interactive · Supernatural · #1609796
Four perfectly normal girls deal with the supernatural. Offers 100 points per addition.
This choice: Mel feels something grab her and pull her back from the edge.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Mel Saved

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As Mel leaned over the railing to get a better look at the mystery train, she could not help but smile in amazement. It was quite the incredible sight - it was translucent, and the ghost train had smoke pouring more than would have been natural for any ordinary vehicle.

Better yet, the smoke seemed to be moving with the train, as though rather than continuously generating more the gas just kept up with it. Then Mel leaned over a little further to get a better look.

"AH!!"

She was falling!

"Ahp!"

That noise was inaudible to Mel over the sounds of her own screams, but she soon felt something grab hold of her from above. A second later she found herself moving upward, only a little but just enough for her to grab hold of the railing and set herself on her own two feet.

Even the highly bookish Mel was a little too overcome with emotion after a near death experience like that, of course, and so she wasted no time in spinning around and hugging her mystery savior. And in doing so, she saw

You have the following choices:

1. Wendy.

2. A boy she had never seen before.

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3. Nobody?

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