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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Romance/Love · #159503
When best of friends have to choose between frienship and love
This choice: She keeps on flirting  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Going further

    by: grunge_guitarist
They walk close to each other. Not touching, but still close. They reach Luis house.

Hannah "You did really well tonight"

Luis "Thanks, I do this best I can"

Hannah "Well, you always play well, I just mean, you had a great victory tonight"

Luis " Thanks, you make me feal like ive just won the super bowl

Hannah laughs at this. They stand outside for a bit. Looking up at the moon. The light, shings down bright tongiht, the sky is clear. Luis looks over at her, as her hair glimmers in the soft moonlight. He is just realizing how much he enjoys monments like this.

Hannah is to busy appreciating the stars right now, she knows this is a special moment, but for some reason deep inside she is resisting her feelings. A couple minutes pass

She says "Its getting late, maybe I should head home now"

Luis replies "yhaa, I need to go to sleep and get some rest"

She says" Ok, im going to walk home, its kind of dark, but I think I can find my way"

Luis says "ok, goodnight"

He hesitates, but then reaches over and gives her a kiss.
She simply replies with a soft "goodnight"

She heads home, as he stand their, after a couple of steps, she hesitates...




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1. Hannah goes back to him

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2. Hannah keeps walking home

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