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You are an astronaut sucked into a solar system of gigantic proportions.
This choice: The girl cocks her head at a strange, small sound.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

Listening, Carefully

    by: Joe Random Author IconMail Icon
The world suddenly tilts, and you stumble and fall.

Outside, a girl, somewhere around twelve years old, is tilting her head, slightly.

"Did you hear that?" she says to her mom, who is sitting beside her.

"What is it, Mala?"

"I don't know. It was just...I could barely hear something. It sounded like someone was yelling, but...a long way away."

"You're hearing things?" Mala's big brother pipes up.

"No, I don't think so. Just...there it is again!"

Inside her ear, you're shouting for help again. "I'm in your ear!" you yell, hoping she understands.

Outside, in the real world, nobody else seems to hear it. Mala....

You have the following choices:

1. Hears you saying you're in her ear.

*Noteb*
2. Decides it's not anything important.

*Noteb* indicates the next chapter needs to be written.
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