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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1488440
You are shrunk in your neighborhood, can you survive?
This choice: Only one way out.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Only one way out.

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Before either of you have time to react, a giant spoon dives in directly behind Elizabeth, pulling away from her. She screams as she is pulled into the pit left by the spoon. You watch the spoon go up to Caroline's mouth, and come out clean. It soon returns, diving in yet again, but this time directly under Elizabeth. She screams as you see her pulled out of the pit and onto the spoon. It hovers just off the surface for a moment

"CAROLINE!! I'M HERE!!! PLEASE DON'T EAT..." Before she can finish the spoon is sent hurdling towards Caroline's mouth. You watch it enter, before being cleaned by her lips. Her mouth swashes tasting a bit before you see her swallow. You wince in sympathy as you watch the lump from her mouthful, including Elizabeth, descend from her neck into her chest cavity.

Your mind races, thinking about what just happened. You don't have much time to dwell on this fact, because soon after you feel yourself lift slightly. You look over to see the handle of the spoon with Caroline's had wrapped around it. You follow it up her arm as you are lifted into the air. As you reach her face you see her mouth open. Her tongue pokes out giving you a nice view of her throat as her hot breath hits you. Strands of saliva dangle between many surfaces glowing from the limited light that makes it into her mouth. She tilts her head back slightly and begins lowering you in. You attempt to kick and fight but there is no hope. The view of her throat is significantly more terrifying as the spoon enters her mouth. Her cavernous mouth is much larger than you expected from your perspective, looking up at her palate. Many gobs of saliva begin falling downward on you, as her mouth begins to close. The last thing you see is the roof of her throat flexing upward as she prepares to eat the mouthful. The light winks away,as you are drawn backwards. Your back slaps into her lips as the spoon is removed from under you. You achieve a moment of free fall down into her mouth.

You are now in the sweltering heat of Caroline's mouth as her tongue begins to lather across your back. All you can do is squirm among the many slick walls as you and the pudding are tasted. After a good amount of time being rolled around on her tongue there is a sudden inescapable contraction from all around you. A loud gulp is heard, followed by a many wet slaps. Her tongue lifts up against the roof of her mouth as the backside of her tongue drops down. You are forced downward toward the throat by a wall of tongue muscles rippling you ever closer to the throat. You feel the many different muscles working together as you are prepared by the mouth to be swallowed, giving you the real experience of what it's like to be a piece of food. At the same time her throat gapes open engulfing you from all sides. Her breath washes up and down your body as you feel yourself enter the throat. Suddenly your legs are seized by the throat and with another gulp you are in to your chest. The tongue then moves back into place above your head sealing you in. Many long rippling muscle movements force you deeper in regular bobbing motions. You feel a slight bend in the throat before you come to a stop. You feel your feet touch a closed spot in the throat, but soon it opens slightly allowing you to be forced in with one last swallow.

As you enter the stomach you slide down the wall and into the pit of the stomach. You roll into the center with the pile of pudding you entered with, landing near Elizabeth.

"HELP!!!" Elizabeth screams repeatedly.

"Elizabeth! Elizabeth, where are you!? " You answer. Before you can get a response the stomach lurches, and you land on top of her. Suddenly the stomach floor begins to sag deeper diagonally away from the valve that let you in. You and Elizabeth are contained in a pool of pudding the deepest part at the back of the stomach. The walls begin churning, folding you and Elizabeth into the pudding as more and more starts being added.

THE END.

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