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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1370817
Will Jack survive his adventure.
This choice: Erica spits you out; she was scaring you to show her power over you.....  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Showing Her Power Over You.

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         Erica giggles and sticks out her tongue, with you on it. With a chuckle she takes you off, licking her lips, "Mmmmm... you taste delicious. But I was just..." Before she finishes, you shout. "DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW SCARY THAT WAS?!" "Of course I did! Juts reminding you who is in charge now," She smiled and tucked you into her pocket, smiling. She giggled and returned to her work. "Now you are mine," She says, going out of the break-room door. You suddenly feel very sick.

What happened next?


(Edited by OBusywriter, because of random things that didn't make sense, like a random cake, that wasn't there before. Also since in a previous chapter Erica said she didn't know how this happened to Jack, she can't all of a sudden have had something planned for him in this situation if she didn't know that he was going to be this way. Also, for a change of title, because, "Oh no," is not a good title, a title is descriptive and clues in to a specific part of the chapter. Lastly when adding make paragraphs like in a book, don't type a line then skip a line then type two and skip a line, etc, etc. Just type editions in the format that I type. Skipping lines like that is just a way lazy people type to make it look like they wrote more.)

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1. Skip ahead to your fate, a few days later.

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2. How will she use you?

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