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Chapter #2

At Jo's house for a big birthday party

    by: Taylor Author IconMail Icon
Your name is Richard Metcalfe and you are 20. You have short hair and dark brown eyes.
Richard Metcalfe:
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It is a lovely summers day and you are laid out in the garden reading a book and in the background is your stereo with a Queen CD playing.

While reading your book you are thinking what you are going to get your girlfriend Jo Bailey for her 21st birthday which is at the end of the month.

Jo Bailey:
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You have been together for nearly 2 and half years now and your debating whether you should propose to her or not.
It has crossed your mind a few times as she is a beautifully stunning girl with long blond hair, a perfect white smile and lovely blue eyes.
You first met her in a nightclub while out with some of your friends. They teased that she was way out of your league but you didn't want to give up and got chatting with her and found you both had a lot in common. You took her for a meal at a nice restaurant and also to see a film and eventually you asked her if she would go out with you. She agreed straight away and the last two and a half years have been great.
Jo has a lovely smile which was one of the things you noticed when you first met her and she also had a stunning slim figure.

The next morning two letters come for you. One is a credit card bill and the other is from Jo.
Eagerly you open the letter and read it. She has sent you an invitation to her 21st birthday party which she is holding at her house. Their is a letter in the envelope aswell. Reading the letter you notice she is in France at the moment visiting some friends but she will be back prior to her party.

Over the next few weeks you make the decision that you are going to propose to Jo at her party and head out into your local town to buy her a ring.
After visiting many jewellers you find a beautiful ring and decide that is the one for her. It is 9 carret gold with a diamond in with purple colours. Looking at the price you see it is £275.
"Jo is definetly worth that if not more." you say to yourself as you go into the jewellers and pay for it.

As the end of the month nears and the days roll by Jo's birthday party is getting closer and you start to feel nervous.
"It will go fine I'm sure." you mother says one evening as you have been chatting about things releating to proposing to Jo.
"I hope so." you reply

Then finally it is the day of Jo's birthday.
You made sure you wore your best clothes and looked your best.
Your father got his Porsche from the garage,you got into the car with your father and he drove you down the road and off towards a village about 30 minutes away.

Jo lived in quite a big house as he parents were quite rich. Her parents own a top riding school and also are trainers for several top horses. Jo herself owns three horses and has also started appearing in major TV shows.
The car turned off the main road down a long gravel drive lined with trees which led to a huge house at the end.
Your dad stopped the car and you got out.
"I'll pick you up on Sunday afternoon unless I hear from you before. Good luck with the proposal!" said your father as you headed for the front door. You waved to your father as he drove off down the drive.
A big oak door stood infront of you. It had a big gold handle in it and a bell-pull next to it. You tugged on the bell-pull. A ding-a-ling came from inside and the door opened.
Jo's mother (Karen) was stood in the doorway.
"Hi Richard come on in, Jo's just got out the shower, she'll be down in a minute."
"Thanks." you reply
"Help yourself to drinks, their in the lounge." Karen said

You went into the lounge and acknowledged other people who were there. Some of the people you hadn't seen since you were at school and you caught up and relived old times.
Then Jo came into the room, she looked gorgeous wearing a long red dress, her hair was tied back and she had a silver pair of shoes on.
Her eyes sparkled as she spotted her boyfriend.
Richard turned and saw his girlfriend.
"Wow, Jo you look stunning." you say as you glide over to her and she throws her arms around you and gives you a long passionate kiss.
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