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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Detective · #1004572

007-style superspy action... on a different scale.

This choice: Crawl out of the burger, slow though it may  •  Go Back...
Chapter #9

A short tour in the cave

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You start crawling with the bread on top of you along with the lettuce and salsa. This will take longer than you thought since you could barely move. You just hope Rachel isn't a glutton and devours everything in no time.

"Sanchez, do you copy?"

"Loud and clear, Agent Jack, did something happen?"

"I'm afraid so. I'm trapped inside a burger."

"What!? How did you end up in there!? Do you need me to get you out of there?!" It's the first time you've heard Sanchez sound so worried, but you couldn't risk Rachel seeing Sanchez's face.

"No, it's okay. I'm moving toward an exit. And how did I end up there? Adella put me there for some kind of weird fantasy."

"She discover you? Does Rachel know too?"

"No, only Adella discover me, but she thought I was an ant. Apparently, she has a strange fetish for killing insects in very creative ways. She even ripped off one of my fake limbs."

"And she put you in the burger so Rachel could devour you without her knowing? That's cruel and disgusting."

"Don't worry, I'll find a way out of this mess, even if it will take a while."

"Want to talk for a while?" Either you were too obvious, or Sanchez is really good at reading people.

"You got me. You never thought about becoming a detective?"

"Nah, I'm not interested. This isn't the first time I've been asked that question. 5 years on the force and I'm still doing my job, although I haven't known your agency for that long. And what about you? You must be very popular with the girls." Well, of course, you sometimes have your eye on a few girls. You even had a relationship years ago, although that relationship is in the past.

"You think so? Imagine how popular I'll be in this ant suit."

"Ha, they'll love it, I can assure you."

Soon you feel the bread being compressed, causing you to sink into the sauce and lettuce. You couldn't see much, but you knew Rachel was about to eat her second burger. Doesn't this woman get tired of eating? , soon you feel the ingredients moving forward and also the sound of lettuce breaking behind you, you try to hurry but the sounds of the pieces of burger being torn off by Rachel's teeth get louder until suddenly the noises stop, then it seems that the burger is placed back where it was.

"Jack? Is everything okay? I heard noises."

"Everything's fine. I think my luck has been helping me a lot." You continue crawling and finally see a way out.

"Just try not to rely too much on your luck. There will be all kinds of people inside, corrupt cops, actors, politicians, rappers, judges, newscasters, and not to mention the party crowd."

You start to leave the burger and notice that you're now near the cup holder.

"Listen, babe, if you want to earn that position, you must be completely honest with your answers. No lies will be accepted, understood?"

"I understand... there's no turning back."

Rachel gets out of the vehicle, but Adella seems to take a few seconds to look at the burger she'd placed you in, then she lets out a long sigh.

"No turning back." She starts to open the door, and you quickly pull out your gun. As you fire, the rope snatches it up to Adella's arm. With barely a chance to react, the rope lifts you to a considerable height. You soon feel the breeze as your body moves from side to side until it suddenly stops.

"I guess she's the new one?" That voice is new. You know it's a woman, but because you're behind Adella's arm, you can't see well.

"You should know that by now. Is the naughty one still in the room?"

"You should know that by now."

Adella enters the room and then begins to climb some stairs. You soon see that the person behind her is a woman with short blue hair. She stopped when Rachel seemed to ask her something, but you didn't pay much attention to the question.

You reach the second floor of the room, and Adella stops to wait for her guide, who appears immediately. You continue moving down the hallway, but soon reach a kind of waiting room.

"This is what you'll do, you wait here and don't step outside these limits. I'll be back in a bit to call you... and by the way, get that cobweb off your arm."

Ah shit! Suddenly, you see Adella's hand holding a wet napkin, and in one motion, they pull out the rope. But what you didn't expect is that the rope would stick to the napkin. Adella sees a small trash can next to an armchair. She throws the napkin, sending you flying and crashing into the trash.

The landing was a bit painful, but nothing serious. As you cut the rope, you look around and all you see are napkins, gum, and beer cans. It was almost full, so you activate your gloves and begin to climb the wall of the trash can. The smell here isn't too bad, but the smell of alcohol makes you want to hold your nose.

After a while, you reach the top, and the first thing you see is the large glass table in front of you. up on your left, you see Adella's enormous arm leaning on the armrest of the chair. Then, a loud sound begins to sound on your right, and suddenly, a huge cart appears in the hallway, containing many cleaning supplies. You notice that the person handling it is a cleaning lady who stops.

"Do you mind? I have to vacuum." The cleaning lady sounds like someone who doesn't like to wait.

"Uh? Oh, right," the lady begins searching through her things in the cart, and you try to think of your next move. You could get out of the trash can and try to get on the cleaning cart. Although you could go with Adella and witness the final interview, on the other hand, you could stay here and wait until everyone leave the zone. Or maybe you could contact Sanchez and give you an idea.
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1. Get in the cleaning cart

2. Return to Adella

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3. Stay in the trash can

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4. Contact Sanchez

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