I'm honestly a bit confused, because I don't quite get what you mean when you say you hate how will looks when he goes Sulva/Kenandandra. We don't really see him much out of BoM when he's still Kenandandra, and the few cases I can think of when he does, he's usually not described as unkempt. He tends to learn to dress better and take care of himself as he ages. Unless you mean the route in which he's working for Fane, which I think can generally be attributed to Will being an absentminded engineer who never properly matured because his life basically became working for Fane.
I'm interested that you chose to call attention to the fact that Will is calling it the Summa. I might not really have noticed it if you hadn't pointed it out, so I'm curious where you're going with it. Seuzz did make a fair point that there are tons of well known books that use the word Summa, so abbreviating it like that makes little sense.
I'm also quite curious why Nash and Will made a mask of Mireya. Definitely some interesting things going on.
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