I'm interested in the story so far, but I'm definitely getting some weird feelings about Mireya. I like her as a character independant of other factors so far, but I'm not sure how possible it is to fit her in the position you're trying to slot her into at the moment. The Stellae are small enough and relativly tight knit enough that it seems somewhat hard to explain away that somebody like her wouldn't have been mentioned in previous TWS storylines given her being in the United States. I say this because you've established that the Stellae call on her to train associates, and she seems quite familiar with several members of the Stellae, so I'm assuming that she would take some part in training Stellae too. Did you have a plan for addressing why she wouldn't have appeared in any routes until now?
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