Devil's Advocate

Fun that I stumbled across this forum! I've just started a new project, and would love help fleshing out the world!

The main synopsis I've created is this:

"In 2018, Jonathan Towne and his wife Valerie elected to have their brains cryogenically preserved with the promise of being awoken in the future when the technology exists. However, when Jon is revived and finds that his wife's cryo chamber was compromised and she had to be woken 40 years earlier, it becomes a race to find her in the unfamiliar and sinister world of 2353. Meanwhile, in a planet shattered by the devastating effects of a mysterious plague, the ALTO Corporation makes a substantial profit selling memories from "Returners" to the highest bidder. If Jon doesn't find Val in time, she may have all her memories of him stolen. To find her, Jon must infiltrate the ALTO Corporation's upper echelon and pursue the band of rebel "Nons" living in the wastes in search of leads to his wife. But at each turn, Val seems further and further away and the ALTO Corporation's control and power continues to grow."

The first two chapters are here:

FOLDER

More than a Memory  (18+) NaNo Winner 2018! — Jon wakes up in 2353 in a body that isn’t his own #2168853 by Emily

Any questions and lore-building thoughts would be much appreciated! Thank you!
-Emily

BOOK

A Piece Of My Heart  (18+) A blog to house my musings, curiosities, and fascinations. #2166092 by Emily