Sci-fi Writers Guild Forum

Hey guys I've just been accepted to the Guild. I'd like to thank ya'll and was wondering how many people are actually here active since most of the posts are about a year or more old.

Secondly I'm writing a sci fi story and was wondering if I could get some critic on it. It's not finished and I try and work on it when I have time but sadly rl keeps me busy. I'd love for some feedback of all sorts but mainly I'm looking towards character development and story development and I do understand that through a lot of it there may be spelling and grammar issues but I'd like mostly suggestions that can help me better develop characters and story.

here's the link: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2017338-War-of-Survival

Thanks guys and hope to hear from you soon.