Sci-fi Writers Guild Forum

Hi, I recently started revising and reposting my story Warbreak. Although I've gotten a lot of feedback in the past about general writing stuff, I have yet to get any comments on the Si-fi aspect. I would love some reviews from the perspective of people that are in to the genre I'm trying to write for. I don't have much GP at the moment so I cant offer that as incentive but if you decide to review one of my chapters and let me know your from here, I would be happy to give you a detailed review of one of your pieces in return. Over the next few months, I hope to have the entire book posted, about 17 chapters in all.


"Warbreak" 
Genre: Si-Fi, Action/adventure, Dark
18+ (Swearing, some graphic fight scenes)