For sure, I've got a lot more than 15 mins' work to do, either way (setting standing alone or woven into the build-up and action). As is, the story is 'skeletal', mostly raw action and emotion, needing some flesh. The setting should be more fun to read in a dynamic context than if it's 'just there', if I get it right
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