Splendid work. It very skillfully eases the eye and the mind into the passage from flowers to weeds. The repetitions, too, flow very smoothly from one line to another.
Congratulations for writing it.
SLAM! (18+) Spring 2006 SLAM! - Congrats to the winners - see you all next time! #554585 by Cappucine
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