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Rated: E · Campfire Creative · Fiction · Detective · #2111539
friends go to a sleepover and they start to disappear with 1 left alive, to see the killer
[Introduction]
Creak! An offle sound came from the door as seven girls: Sophie M.C, Chloe, Maya, Emily, Lyla, Camreon and Jestyne walked in and took a look around. As Sophie S.L ( not Sophie M.C ) was the host for the party tonight she did what any poilet host would do and greated them in. It was a gigantic mansion! There was silver floor tyles and blue paterned walls and in the corner there was rounded carpet staris with a chandiler hanging above it! It was truly magical but a bit eary at the same time beacause the light were dimmed and everything looked a little old. That night there was a major thunder storm and we were exspecting a power outage, but hopfully that wont happen. " Welcome! " Sid Sophie S.L reaching her arms out wide. She continued pointing twords the floor now " You can put your bags down here! " All the girls placed there bags down still in awe from the modern house they had the privladge to be sleeping in. Imidiatly after that a maid came rushing down the steps twords us, quirtsyed, and took our bags up stairs. " Now that thats seddled, we can head to the dinner table well i grab the 12 cource meal from the oven " Sophie S.L said and hurried off behind the counter. " Well as beautifull as this looks I've had to go to the restroom since we got in the car so if you'll exscuse me I'll be back in a moment. " Said Sophie M.C ( not Sophie S.L ) and she hurried off down the ever lasting hall way. It was nearly silince and every body got comfortable in there chairs but after about a minute f peace and quiet they heard a scream! AAAAAAAHHHH!!! It rang in the six's ear drums and they threw them selves up from the table! " Sophie M.C?!?! " cried the six voices waiting for a word back but there was nothing! " omg " said Chloe looking down " i think Sophie M.C's... gone " Chloe said as she pulled out Soshie M.C's designated chair. " Wait what's this? " Chloe said picking up a note that had been tapped on to Sophie M.C's chair. " It's a note! " cried Lyla and Chloe read aloud: " In the fr- " Chloe was cut off by Lyla " Before we start can i get something to drink? It's getting toasty in here! " " Fine if you must but were reading without you " harshly replied Chloe " Any way back to the note, In the freezer something not so nice watch out for the tray of blank. So guys if anything i think were supposed to figure out the word. It's three lettered by the way. " said Chloe. " Wait! " said Emily " dosn't like ICE fit in the blank? " Emily said as Lyla from the kitchen was reaching into the freezer to grab the ICE TRAY for her drink! " Wait Lyla! don't touche the ice! but it was too late. Just as Jestyne told Lyla not to touche the ice, Lyla was mid grab and took it out. " What? " said Lyla as she dropped and ice cube in her drink and then one on the floor without realizing! " I'm just fi- WOOO!!! " Lyla said as she slipped on the ice cube and fell! Hitting her head hard against the tiles, knoking her out! her drink spilled and blood pooled and just over a wire that was plugged in to the T.V propped up in the kitchen making it supper dangerous! " OMG! " said maya! " what are we going to do?! " said Cameron " guys i think i see a note! " said Jesteyne pointing at a rectangular paper directly over the cord. " ooh I'll get it! " said Cameron running at the spead of light trying to get to the paper. " Cameron noo! said Chloe reaching twords her friend Cameron. She didn't want to lose her to. But it was ok beacause Cameron just simply steped over the cord and picked it up! everyone sighed a strong breath of relif as Cameron dropped the paper again! " oops I'll get that " said Cameron but this time as she picked it up and electricuted herself! Lying face down twords Lyla with the note safely in her hand. The girls ran over and unpluged the cord but it was to late to save her now. Jesteyne picked up the note as as she took a deep breath to start reading sophie S.L came rushing down the stairs " what happened! " she said. Then Chloe replied: " stuff " sounding a little ticked off. " well lets read the note already! " said Emily and Chloe began to read but was interrupted by a lightning strike outside nocking out the power! " oh no! Chloe you better go up stairs and get the flashlights! " Sophie S.L said. " ok! " said Chloe and she was up the stairs and just after Sophie S.L found a flashlight from behind the counter! " oh here's one! " Sophie S.L said grabbing the flashlight " ok lets red without her then! " said Maya and she took the flashlight. " you shouldn't have left all of those toys for someone tripping on the from down the blank will make lot's of noise! oh and by the way the blank is 6 letters " said Maya and they heard Chloe coming down the stairs. " wait... doesn't stairs fit perfectly there? " said Jesteyne and they all looked towards the steps that now had toys all over them! " wait Chloe watch for those t- " and Just as Emily was giving her the warning Chloe got her foot caught in a toy plane and rolled down the stairs and landed flat on her face! " noo! not Chloe too! " said Maya " wahhh!!! " Jesteyne started crying and whipped her tears for a moment. " wait where's Emily? " they turned there heads to the kitchen to see Emily with a gun to her head! Emily began to speak with a petrified face and tears rolling down her eyes " guys I'm sorry I just can't take it anymore!!! " BOOM and just like that... Emily was gone. Jesteyne walked over to her and kneeled down and noticed another note. her voice sad and distressed she began to read: " spent so much time watching Emily cry'a but now where's your best friend Maya? immediately Jesteyne got up and saw Maya dead on the floor lay so surely it sent shivers down her spine. And to make maters worse she looked up to see Sophie S.L from across the room holding a shot gun straight at her! there was no where to run! no where to turn! no final hope! this was her fate! only a miracle could save her now. Sophie began to talk with a slow threatening voice coming closer to Jesteyne with every step. " heh, you- Jesteyne that is. You are such a prick, just an obstacle in my way of doing great things. And to think- all these problems slipped right passed you. Right under you nose. let's just face it Jesteyne, you failed them. You failed your life! Now what do we do with obstacles? GET THEM OUT OF THE WAY! " " Sophie no! your a criminal! " Jesteyne said with tears rolling over her eyes like waves on a shore. " let's just say. I'm just doing what I'm told " Sophie S.L put her hand on the trigger and as Jesteyns eyes turned into black and only see in her mind a bullet racing towards her when the lighting came by in the window but then she opened her eyes the gun was out ammo! Jesteyne bulleted out of the house finally the doors were unlocked and she was ready to go home and all she could here was Sophie's cries because she let one slip away. The end?

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